I couldn't help but notice the amount of time between the release of the first episode and this episode... I believe there is a 15 day difference between them. It's great that you can release a new video within that small space of time, but it seems WAY too similar to the previous video.
The main issue here is the jokes and the overall originality of the flash. The jokes were okay, I guess, I chuckled at a few, some were just not funny, more effort need to be put into the jokes alongside adding something completely new which has never been done before...
And to do this you need to put more time into it:- More time into the jokes, more time into thinking about what you are going to do in the next episode, more time into everything. I hate to break it to you, a lone person (I'm assuming there is just one of you, excluding voice actors) making a full, fluid animation with bits of music in, while thinking up the jokes, in 15 days... Difficult task, particularly when you are uploading it to the net for commercial reasons, because it typically needs to be of the very best quality in order to become a massive success. (Did I go a bit over the top there...?)
Here's what you did good. The animation was very good, along with the voice acting, and the transactions were less annoying and less repetitive than last time, you also used different colours in each sketch rather than using the same very bold blue lines, so it's that little bit nicer on the eyes to watch.
+ Animation is fluid
+ Transactions aren't annoying any more
+ Voice acting is still brilliant
- Jokes weren't bad, but REALLY need to be improved on.
- Too much like the previous episode
- Not enough time spent on it.
That's all it really needs, more time for each episode, and this could very well be the next ASDF, but try not to associate yourself with ASDF, bad idea... really bad idea.
I hope you keep up the good work, you've got something going here. Improve it and all will be awesome.
I'm going to do "something else" now and give you a...
Review: 3.5 stars
Vote: 3 Picos
(P.S. I used that pun last time... Man I love that pun)
(P.S.S I noticed the lack of youtube subscription advertisements for your channel, glad you did, makes the flash seem more professional rather than have you seemingly poking us with a stick that says "subscribe to us" on it.)